Allya
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Post by Allya on Dec 20, 2010 16:20:27 GMT -5
I got bored at lunch today:
Twitter Haiku Communication Reduced to just one forty Language devolving
Accounting I had a vision of days gone by And wondered why I stay This is not me, my soul cries And yet the bills are paid
Perhaps within the ledgers One will see my art See beauty in the figures It would be a start
Perhaps in ones and zeroes I can share the words Hide behind a pen-name In anonymity be heard
Yes I have a vision Someday I will share A lovely, twisting vision In reality, snared
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Post by Allya on Jan 5, 2011 16:12:39 GMT -5
There were several five alarm fires recently in my city. It made me wonder what it'd be like to be a fire bug.
Fire Bug
You ask me if I’m sorry For the smoke and fire and ash You ask me if I’m sorry And I can only laugh
There’s something you can’t see As smoke billows to the sky A monument to me My glory defined
You don’t feel the need So maybe you don’t know The hunger I must feed Or the beast will grow
I feed it with the burning I love to watch the burning The buildings must keep burning Or the beast will burn my soul
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Post by Allya on Jan 5, 2011 16:31:34 GMT -5
Charm City Metro
At night with cramped hands and tired feet Venturing down into the belly of Charm City Warm winds carry moisture and fouls smells From places unseen in the dimly lit tunnels Walking forth as the signal chimes Sliding into my safely padded seat Looking through dirty windows Watching reflections of my fellow travelers Careful not to stare or meet the eye I wonder
Who would we be if the chimes didn’t ring, If the doors didn’t open? How long before we’d see Each other?
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Post by ASGetty ((Zovo)) on Jan 5, 2011 16:48:57 GMT -5
You should really get in on the monthly poetry/Flash-fiction competition. Your work is so enjoyable.
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Post by Allya on Jan 6, 2011 10:04:31 GMT -5
Thanks Zovo . I was going to do the Seuss one but I was ill for three weeks and never finished my piece. I think I'll post it when I'm done even though the contest is over. It's just cute.
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Post by Allya on Jan 7, 2011 16:17:24 GMT -5
I'm not using this for the January assignment because I don't like it enough. However I really liked the phrase 'urban fantasy' so I had to use it in something.
Guerrilla Gardener
Waiting for the cover of night I slip into the darkness My work is good, my work is right Though many call it madness
My fingernails are black with earth My pockets filled with seeds All will soon witness the birth Of my urban fantasy
Green grenades and seed bombs My weapons of choice Humanity does not belong Where nature has no voice
As the sun warms the streets Budding soldiers will rise In many colors they will greet Weary city eyes
I fight the filth with flowers The decay with leafy greens I’ll drain the blight of power With Guerrilla Gardening
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Post by Allya on Feb 15, 2011 17:03:00 GMT -5
I wrote this one for my step-sister whose embroiled in the Gay Marriage debate in Maryland at the moment...
The Definition of Marriage
What is in a word, a piece of paper, a line? What tricky definition does common sense defy? That I can give my heart to hers, and she to mine But cannot share the rights that others toss aside. That I can look lovingly into my children’s eyes But not be called a mother on Parent-Teacher night.
What is this institution you fear we will defile By sharing words and rights that you’ve had all the while? Why is it so easy for you to champion denial Of equality for others? Do you so revile Us that with a righteous smile You repeat the words from the rank and file?
Equality is slippery when it’s for others, for them We only request what you abuse on whim That she can marry her and he can marry him And be so protected from the storms that life blows in You’ll not find the answer in any book or hymn Knowledge of right and wrong comes from within
Of our lifestyle you don’t have to approve You don’t have to like us for your heart to move In this day and age there’s really no excuse By gaining this right we do not cause you to lose Only bigotry and hatred could drive you to refuse Our right to marry the her or him we choose
*Modified to it's final version*
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Post by Jenny (Reffy) on Mar 1, 2011 10:46:20 GMT -5
Dude ... Allya! *Round of applause!* Loved the Gay Rights poem. Did your step-sister get to read it out loud or anything at one of those debates? I hope she won or that they helped the movement somewhat. The poem is pretty fantastic. I definitely think you portrayed the bitterness of it and along with the stupid reasoning - and did it tastefully and without losing the message. Nothing I can pick out that could have been better.
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Post by Allya on Apr 4, 2011 16:09:27 GMT -5
Sorry I've been absent for a bit. I started a new job and it has taken ALOT of my time. Thanks for the feedback Reffy. I got the gay rights poem published by the Baltimore paper which was pretty cool. Don't think it helped though...lawmakers pushed the bill into committee to die Oh well, here's a new completely unrelated poem: Siren's SnareI can fall for siren songs That cloud the mind in docile fog I’m not immune to twisted tunes That promise much and fade too soon You can lead me by the ear I’ll bend to pleasure, bend to fear And then when you have sprung your trap I’ll curse you ‘til you take it back Yes I can fall for siren songs But mind intentions well Or you may find your honey trap Has hastened you to hell
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Post by Kaez on Apr 4, 2011 16:18:05 GMT -5
I continue to very much enjoy your poetry. Hope to see you around more often.
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Post by ASGetty ((Zovo)) on Apr 4, 2011 16:25:47 GMT -5
I continue to very much enjoy your poetry. Hope to see you around more often. ^^^
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Post by Allya on Apr 5, 2011 13:30:26 GMT -5
Thanks guys! I'm working on an entry for a magazine whose theme is Siren Songs which is why this the theme of the one below is so similar to the one above.
Summer's Sweet Siren Song
Simple tones in carnival tune Waft through summer air Children stop, none are immune To the frozen fare Piglets, banks, and penny jars Are raided with abandon To join the sticky sweet bazaar And feast away the famine With minds abuzz and bellies full He slowly slips away This pied piper knows his pull And doesn’t wish to stay Rolling down another street He begins the dance again To lure the children to their feet And joyfully reel them in Heat stretches past the sugar high But memories will not fade Adults smile at days gone by And the siren song that played
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Post by Allya on Apr 8, 2011 12:58:41 GMT -5
Looks like the Gay Marriage poem is getting published! I'll post more details when I have them. Yay!!
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Post by Dylaria on Apr 8, 2011 14:04:04 GMT -5
I remember ice cream trucks, though there are no ice cream trucks around here any more. Probably society scared that children will be taken in the back to who knows where.
The only thing I can criticize is that I felt that the ice cream man being compared to the pied piper was a little cynical. Yeah, its true and I wouldn't argue that but kinda dampens the nostalgia a little. Beyond that it kept a pattern and I was able to read it at a rhythm easily so that all worked. I know, I'm not amazing at giving feedback on poetry.
Anywho, congratulations on the publishing of the other poem! That's pretty darn cool.
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Post by Allya on Apr 9, 2011 13:08:06 GMT -5
Accepting Embrace
Before your whispers filled my ears And drowned my wary cries Before visions in ribboned silk Blinded cautious eyes Before your soft caressing touch Had stayed my readied blade You knew that you could have me Your wish I would obey
Before I watched my comrades Fall in crimson fields Before my feet had left the land And I begged the sea to yield Before my raw and weathered hands Had clawed upon the floor You looked into my soul And there had found the door
Before I faced the serpents And fought their poisoned glare Before my king and country Had brought my cross to bear Before I with raspy breath Felt the flame grow cold You knew that you would steal my heart Enchanting with the hold
You watch me now with crooked smile Because you’ve always known You watch me and I cannot move My body turned to stone You watch me and I feel the peace You promised in your tune I never could foresee this death The end you always knew
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