May Challenge Discussion

Allya Senior Scribe My Little Monster! Posts: 2,271	May Challenge Discussion May 4, 2012 14:19:24 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Allya on May 4, 2012 14:19:24 GMT -5 Haha it ignored my spaces. I give up lol.

Jenny (Reffy) Senior Author Giggle Factory ... and who the hell knows where Agent Reffy is. Posts: 8,193	May Challenge Discussion May 4, 2012 14:26:03 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jenny (Reffy) on May 4, 2012 14:26:03 GMT -5 Taed knows how to do nifty spacing thingy ... he could show you his voodoo :]
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Matteo ((Taed)) Admin Mostly Harmless Oh, I say! Posts: 23,339	May Challenge Discussion May 4, 2012 14:31:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Matteo ((Taed)) on May 4, 2012 14:31:20 GMT -5 Yeah, the UBBC for that is [./pre] (no period). That preserves the spaces of everything between the tags.
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Allya Senior Scribe My Little Monster! Posts: 2,271	May Challenge Discussion May 4, 2012 14:48:27 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Allya on May 4, 2012 14:48:27 GMT -5 Hmmm that makes the notations super spaced out and the words super tiny. It's mocking me. (Seriously though, it's no big deal. I'm busy writing about spaceships killing people anyways.)

JMDavis ((Silver)) Senior Wordsmith THIEF!, Shaker of Hards I'll feel that in the morning... Posts: 17,698	May Challenge Discussion May 5, 2012 17:16:24 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by JMDavis ((Silver)) on May 5, 2012 17:16:24 GMT -5 Thought I had an idea for this one but I guess I don't... the characters have so far felt too wooden for my tastes. Might go back and see what I can do to adjust them, but might end up not doing anything >_<
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Deleted Deleted Member Posts: 0	May Challenge Discussion May 5, 2012 21:13:15 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Deleted on May 5, 2012 21:13:15 GMT -5 You still have until Tuesday to edit to your heart's content, Silver.

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May Challenge Discussion May 5, 2012 21:50:46 GMT -5

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May 5, 2012 21:13:15 GMT -5 Croswynd said:

You still have until Tuesday to edit to your heart's content, Silver.

Edited five times. Twice before finishing. Two times directly after finishing. Third time after posting.

Still not entirely happy with it... but the reason for why I'm not happy with it couldn't really be helped.

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May Challenge Discussion May 5, 2012 22:05:53 GMT -5

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May 5, 2012 21:50:46 GMT -5 JMDavis ((Silver)) said:

May 5, 2012 21:13:15 GMT -5 Croswynd said:

You still have until Tuesday to edit to your heart's content, Silver.

Edited five times. Twice before finishing. Two times directly after finishing. Third time after posting.

Still not entirely happy with it... but the reason for why I'm not happy with it couldn't really be helped.

Well, have someone look at it and see if they can help, then. Or is that against the rules?

Jenny (Reffy) Senior Author Giggle Factory ... and who the hell knows where Agent Reffy is. Posts: 8,193	May Challenge Discussion May 6, 2012 5:16:30 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jenny (Reffy) on May 6, 2012 5:16:30 GMT -5 6 ... 6 whole entries! Holy moly :] My wednesday is going to be busy!
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Allya Senior Scribe My Little Monster! Posts: 2,271	May Challenge Discussion May 6, 2012 7:51:45 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Allya on May 6, 2012 7:51:45 GMT -5 All of you prose writers are making me look lazy
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Matteo ((Taed)) Admin Mostly Harmless Oh, I say! Posts: 23,339	May Challenge Discussion May 6, 2012 7:54:50 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Matteo ((Taed)) on May 6, 2012 7:54:50 GMT -5 Prose before hoes.
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J.O.N ((Dragonwing)) Legendary Wordsmith The Cream Wrong Posts: 20,440	May Challenge Discussion May 6, 2012 8:27:10 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by J.O.N ((Dragonwing)) on May 6, 2012 8:27:10 GMT -5 May 6, 2012 7:54:50 GMT -5 Matteo ((Taed)) said: Prose before hoes. Clearly not enough sarcasm.
	Jul 4, 2012 14:47:13 GMT -5 Matteo ((Taed)) said: Basically what we're saying is that the Higgs Boson has a corkscrew-shaped penis.

Deleted Deleted Member Posts: 0	May Challenge Discussion May 6, 2012 13:27:42 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Deleted on May 6, 2012 13:27:42 GMT -5 I'm almost done with my entry. Just gotta wrap things up.

ASGetty ((Zovo)) Admin Morgan Freeman? COWARD! Posts: 24,012	May Challenge Discussion May 6, 2012 13:29:06 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ASGetty ((Zovo)) on May 6, 2012 13:29:06 GMT -5 And I'm sure I've still got somehting coming. Haven't started yet, but I'll make some words happen.
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May Challenge Discussion May 7, 2012 14:28:02 GMT -5

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First person takes awhile to warm up to. I found myself writing into third person in the first few hours, but it's becoming easier now. Hopefully I can go back and catch all the 'she did this' 'her friend replied', etc. I think I'm beginning to like the informality that comes with the perspective.