STORY OF GREAT BIRTH OF DEAREST LEADER OF DPRK

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STORY OF GREAT BIRTH OF DEAREST LEADER OF DPRK Apr 1, 2011 10:54:38 GMT -5

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Post by Kaez on Apr 1, 2011 10:54:38 GMT -5

THIS STORY IS OF GREAT BIRTH. GREAT BIRTH OF DEAREST LEADER OF NATION OF DEMOCRATIC PEOPLE'S REPUBLIC OF KOREA.

WITH YOU I SHARE.

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GREAT MOMENT COME UPON ALL OF KOREA ONE DAY. ONE DAY A SWALLOWBIRD (IS HUMMINGBIRD TO WEST) COME TO ALL PEOPLE OF KOREA AND SING BEAUTIFUL SONG. IT SING SONG OF GREAT COMING BIRTH OF DEAR LEADER OF NATION OF DEMOCRATIC PEOPLE'S REPUBLIC OF KOREA. SONG SAY SOON BORN WOULD BE THIS LEADER AND MAKE GREAT NATION RISE TO GLORY AND JUCHE.

IS TRUTHFUL.

ATOP MOUNT PAEKTU, HIGHEST EVER OF ALL MOUNTAINS, MOTHER OF DEAR LEADER HEARD SONG OF GREAT SWALLOWBIRD LIKE MELODY TO EARS. SIX MONTHS ADVANCED AND WITH NO AID OF PHYSICIAN, DEAR LEADER EMERGE FROM WOMB OF MOTHER OF DEAR LEADER. SO SHAME WAS ALL PHYSICIAN IN GREAT NATION THAT THEY FLEE AND KNOW NOT THEY NEEDED WHEN DEAR LEADER NOW BORN.

ALL CRANE AND ALL SWALLOWBIRD AND SINGING BIRDS OF ALL KIND IS COME TO MOUNT PAEKTU TO GREET THE BIRTH OF DEAR LEADER. ALL BIRD GREET DEAR LEADER AND SING AND PRAISE FOR NO MORE THAN SIX WEEK. DEAR LEADER GREW STRONG AND GLORY QUICKLY AND SOON WAS POWER TO LIFT MANY GREAT STONE AND BUILD GOOD THING. SOON DEAR LEADER ONLY CHILD BRINGS GREAT PROSPERITY TO GLORIOUS NATION.

ON BIRTHDAY OF ONE YEAR, UPON HIGHEST EVER OF ALL MOUNTAINS APPEAR TWO RAINBOWS AND A STAR SHONE BRIGHTLY IN SKY THAT HAD NOT SHONE. IS STAR OF DEAR LEADER. THIS GLORIOUS DAY AND FOREVER AFTER NATION OF DEMOCRATIC PEOPLE'S REPUBLIC OF KOREA CELEBRATE BIRTH OF DEAR LEADER ANNUALLY. CELEBRATE WITH SONG AND DANCE AND EACH YEAR DEAR LEADER IS LIFTED UPON THE WINGS OF GENTLE CRANES TO GREET PEOPLE OF NATION.

AFTER MANY YEARS OF PROSPERING NATION TO GREATNESS IN ENERGY AND ART AND IN POLITIC, PEOPLE OF GLORIOUS NATION MAKE BENEFIT DEAR LEADER WITH SONG OF BEAUTIFUL WORDS.

WITH YOU I SHARE.

YOU PUSH AWAY THE SEVERE STORM
YOU MAKE US BELIEF, DEAREST LEADERWE CANNOT LIVE WITHOUT YOU
GREAT NATION DEMOCRATIC PEOPLE'S REPUBLIC OF KOREA CANNOT EXIST WITHOUT YOU

FUTURE AND HOPE ARE DEPENDS ON YOU
FATE OF PEOPLE DEPEND ON YOU, DEAREST LEADER

WE CANNOT LIVE WITHOUT YOU
GREAT NATION DEMOCRATIC PEOPLE'S REPUBLIC OF KOREA CANNOT EXIST WITHOUT YOU

EVEN IF WORLD CHANGE FOR NEVER GREATNESS
PEOPLE OF GLORIOUS NATION BELIEVE IN YOU, DEAR LEADER

WE CANNOT LIVE WITHOUT YOU
GREAT NATION DEMOCRATIC PEOPLE'S REPUBLIC OF KOREA CANNOT EXIST WITHOUT YOU

OH GREAT COMRADE KIM JONG-IL
GREAT NATION CANNOT EXIST WITHOUT YOU

IS SONG NOT JUST OF BEAUTY. IS SONG ALSO OF TRUTH.

SINCE GREAT HOMELAND LIBERATION WAR AGAINST UNPURE WEST, FOR ALL TIME SINCE AND EVER AFTER, DEAR LEADER EXIST FOR BENEFIT GREAT NATION AS BEFORE HIM ETERNAL PRESIDENT DID SO AS WELL. PEOPLE ALL SING PRAISES FOR GREAT BIRTH STORY AND TELL MANY TIME EACH DAY TO CHILDREN OF GREAT NATION. THIS STORY NOT JUST STORY OF BIRTH. STORY OF ALL LIFE AS WELL.

THOUGH GREAT NATION HAVE STRUGGLE AT TIME. GREAT NATION HAS FOOT SHORTAGE FOR FAILURE OF PEOPLE TO LISTEN TO WISDOM OF DEAR LEADER. BUT DEAR LEADER OVERWHELM WITH COMPASSION AND NOT GIVE UP ON PEOPLE OF GREAT NATION. HE EAT NOTHING BUT FOOD THEY EAT. HE LIVE IN WAY THEY LIVE. HE IS COMRADE TO ALL PEOPLE OF GLORIOUS NATION AND IS TRUTH. THIS IS WHY BIRTH IS CELEBRATION.

MAYBE YOU SHARE ALSO THIS STORY. MAYBE YOU TEACH STORY OF GLORIOUS BIRTH OF DEAR LEADER TO CHILDREN OF WEST AND ONE DAY WEST NOT SUFFER SO GREATLY. WEST HAS MANY THING TO LEARN FROM NATION SUCH AS GREAT DEMOCRATIC PEOPLE'S REPUBLIC OF KOREA. FIND JUCHE WISDOM FOR ALL CAPITALIST NATION SUCH AS YOURS AND BE RISEN TO GREATNESS. DEAR LEADER OFFER YOU COMPASSION IN YOUR STRUGGLE BUT ALSO CAN DESTROY IF NOT.

GREAT STORY CONCLUDES.

Better luck next time; don't worry so much.

ARSmith ((Wolfeh)) Junior Author The Wolfinator Posts: 3,138	STORY OF GREAT BIRTH OF DEAREST LEADER OF DPRK Apr 1, 2011 19:11:32 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ARSmith ((Wolfeh)) on Apr 1, 2011 19:11:32 GMT -5 ...
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STORY OF GREAT BIRTH OF DEAREST LEADER OF DPRK Apr 1, 2011 19:26:02 GMT -5

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Post by ASGetty ((Zovo)) on Apr 1, 2011 19:26:02 GMT -5

I really enjoyed this. I got a really strong sense of the wonderment of Great Leader's birth and the effect the event had on his people. Also, kudos to you on the biographical post; it takes courage to come right out and write so intimately about oneself on the internet. Again, well done.

However, I noticed some capitalization problems you might want to correct. Some issues with commas as well. Check your verb conjugation in relation to your pronouns; you've got a really good start here, but it needs some polish.

Looking forward to the sequel.

Last Edit: Apr 1, 2011 19:26:27 GMT -5 by ASGetty ((Zovo))

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STORY OF GREAT BIRTH OF DEAREST LEADER OF DPRK Apr 1, 2011 19:39:45 GMT -5

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Post by Sensar on Apr 1, 2011 19:39:45 GMT -5

To add to that, there is a spelling error that is standing out and bothering me.

"LEADERWE" should be LEADER.

But otherwise enjoyable. I didn't know the Hummingbird is also known as the Swallow-bird! You learn something new every day, right?

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STORY OF GREAT BIRTH OF DEAREST LEADER OF DPRK Apr 1, 2011 19:43:27 GMT -5

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Post by ASGetty ((Zovo)) on Apr 1, 2011 19:43:27 GMT -5

Apr 1, 2011 19:39:45 GMT -5 Sensar said:

To add to that, there is a spelling error that is standing out and bothering me.

"LEADERWE" should be LEADER.

But otherwise enjoyable. I didn't know the Hummingbird is also known as the Swallow-bird! You learn something new every day, right?

It's actually a spacing/comma error. Should be ". . . Leader, we. . ."

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STORY OF GREAT BIRTH OF DEAREST LEADER OF DPRK Apr 1, 2011 21:01:33 GMT -5

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Post by Faerd ((B'slash)) on Apr 1, 2011 21:01:33 GMT -5

Hey there! I'm glad to see a new face around, and look forward to hearing more from you.

I agree with the above critiques and comments - overall, it was very well-written and intriguing. That said, I also wish to point out that there are a few pluralization issues (eg: so shame was all physician, all bird greet dear leader, etc). Keep up the work!

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STORY OF GREAT BIRTH OF DEAREST LEADER OF DPRK Apr 2, 2011 3:48:06 GMT -5

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Post by Sensar on Apr 2, 2011 3:48:06 GMT -5

Apr 1, 2011 19:43:27 GMT -5 ASGetty ((Zovo)) said:

Apr 1, 2011 19:39:45 GMT -5 Sensar said:

To add to that, there is a spelling error that is standing out and bothering me.

"LEADERWE" should be LEADER.

But otherwise enjoyable. I didn't know the Hummingbird is also known as the Swallow-bird! You learn something new every day, right?

It's actually a spacing/comma error. Should be ". . . Leader, we. . ."

Hm. So it is. I suppose my eyes skimmed a little and took the mistake for a spelling error.

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STORY OF GREAT BIRTH OF DEAREST LEADER OF DPRK Apr 2, 2011 11:52:58 GMT -5

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Post by Kaez on Apr 2, 2011 11:52:58 GMT -5

Apr 2, 2011 11:12:31 GMT -5 ARSmith ((Wolfeh)) said:

What the fuck happened? I'm so confused.

Why'd the Admins and trolls of AWR make Asian accounts and support NORTH Korea?

Or something?

Fuck if I know. qq

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STORY OF GREAT BIRTH OF DEAREST LEADER OF DPRK Apr 2, 2011 14:54:40 GMT -5

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Post by ASGetty ((Zovo)) on Apr 2, 2011 14:54:40 GMT -5

Apr 2, 2011 11:12:31 GMT -5 ARSmith ((Wolfeh)) said:

What the fuck happened? I'm so confused.

Why'd the Admins and trolls of AWR make Asian accounts and support NORTH Korea?

Or something?

Fuck if I know. qq

It was an April fools gag, Wolf, relax.
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STORY OF GREAT BIRTH OF DEAREST LEADER OF DPRK Apr 2, 2011 15:55:03 GMT -5

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Post by Kwan on Apr 2, 2011 15:55:03 GMT -5

Apr 2, 2011 11:12:31 GMT -5 ARSmith ((Wolfeh)) said:

What the fuck happened? I'm so confused.

Why'd the Admins and trolls of AWR make Asian accounts and support NORTH Korea?

Or something?

Fuck if I know. qq

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STORY OF GREAT BIRTH OF DEAREST LEADER OF DPRK Apr 2, 2011 17:40:10 GMT -5

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Post by Sensar on Apr 2, 2011 17:40:10 GMT -5

Apr 2, 2011 15:55:03 GMT -5 Kwan said:

Apr 2, 2011 11:12:31 GMT -5 ARSmith ((Wolfeh)) said:

What the fuck happened? I'm so confused.

Why'd the Admins and trolls of AWR make Asian accounts and support NORTH Korea?

Or something?

Fuck if I know. qq

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STORY OF GREAT BIRTH OF DEAREST LEADER OF DPRK Apr 3, 2011 15:15:16 GMT -5

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Post by ARSmith ((Wolfeh)) on Apr 3, 2011 15:15:16 GMT -5

Apr 2, 2011 15:55:03 GMT -5 Kwan said:

Apr 2, 2011 11:12:31 GMT -5 ARSmith ((Wolfeh)) said:

What the fuck happened? I'm so confused.

Why'd the Admins and trolls of AWR make Asian accounts and support NORTH Korea?

Or something?

Fuck if I know. qq

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