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Post by James on Feb 9, 2013 17:35:49 GMT -5
I think with poetry, I really want brevity. Because I think:
I have yet to google, "why won't my book recharge?"
... is probably better on its own than the poem in full.
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Post by James on Feb 23, 2013 4:51:06 GMT -5
Oh, Cincinnatus, What would you think? If you were to witness, Orientation Week.
Upon a closer inspection, Virgil would surely damn this new breed of gentemque togatam.
Alas, no longer is it said; cedant arma togae, but rather it’s a clarion call for young, boozy bodies to sway.
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Post by James on Mar 18, 2013 2:22:11 GMT -5
I saw an ant today, he looked like an industrious little fellow. Vainly trying to carry a crisp cumb through the cracks in the pavement. I gently took the cumb and placed it on other side of the stretching ravine. The ant ran in circles and panicked, not understanding random acts of kindness. Until he found his crisp and with rejoicing, once more carried on his journey.
I felt sad when the woman stood on him.
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Post by James on Apr 6, 2013 5:14:18 GMT -5
Last night, I had such a lovely dream.
I dreamt I was in Broadstairs, we got ice cream at Morelli’s and it was just as I remembered. We wandered down the long, thin main road: there was the bakery that sold the finest gingerbread men in all the world, and the antique bookstore where I bought my first ever Sherlock Holmes book.
I wonder if they’re still there today.
Overhead, Bleak House watched the little town, and the ghost of Dickens was not amused for it began to rain. We rushed down the road and along the pier, the water raging and turning, smashing against the side, rising up over cars like it did in days of old.
We hid beneath the roof of that silly building, which I never knew what was for, just sitting on the pier. It didn’t sell fish and chips anymore.
I wonder if that’s true.
The rain fell harder and the waves grew angrier, it was the most beautiful thing in the world.
I stepped away from my cover and stood at the railings, a voice screaming for me to stand back. I watched the sea boil in anger, the sand disappearing behind a rain of mist. My eyes turned to the little town that stood steadfast against the oncoming storm, and then to Bleak House, a mere shadow atop the hill.
I didn’t noticed the wave come over the railing nor feel its icy grip take me, until I tumbled over the side…
… and woke up.
I wasn’t in Broadstairs anymore.
I was in Hamilton.
Fuck.
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Post by James on Apr 24, 2013 6:47:20 GMT -5
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Post by Kaez on Apr 24, 2013 7:00:46 GMT -5
at the age of two and a half i was given a bike by an overzealous relative who didn't approve of health and safety. the leftist thought police wasn't going to stop her little boy from experiencing the joys of a leftist health system. you never forget how to ride a bike, but the memories of that faithful day are as foggy as the english channel. it was very shiny, the bicycle, not the friday, and also, sadly, several sizes too big. i didn't ride it once. because i had recently learnt the ability to run.instead i found a bike in our shed rusting and falling to pieces and insisted, if not demanded, that the iron wheel was for turning and that my father and i would fix it.we didn't, but that's beside the point. I really, really enjoyed this poem. I -slightly- changed the line divisions because just a few of them felt off to me, personally, but overall really liked those as well. EDIT: Bolded for clarification, also added periods consistently.
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Post by James on Apr 24, 2013 7:10:04 GMT -5
Cheers, Kaez! I agree with all of those changes.
And I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Post by James on May 15, 2013 5:59:34 GMT -5
you hold an umbrella, like an aristocrat.
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Post by Jenny (Reffy) on Jun 7, 2013 7:47:39 GMT -5
you hold an umbrella, like an aristocrat. I liked this. It's simple but thought provoking. I wondered who it was holding the umbrella and what they do and if they are an aristocrat. I thought of Dr Who as well You'd be good at doing Flash, me thinks. Pity it isn't something you'd enjoy.
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Post by James on Mar 12, 2014 5:21:02 GMT -5
Sow
All shoulders are burdened with the heavy straps of time
Do not slump, as if carrying some rock ladened sack
Wear those burdens like the most magnificent mantle
The fabric weaved with scars and joy, hope and despair
Gather new burdens find them and hold them tight
Let the mantle grow long and gorgeous into the night
Until people stop, pause
and stand in awe of the story of your life This thread is being resurrected just because I don't think this poem really matched the theme of 'watching'. Though, on that note, I'm writing a new poem for that thread at the moment called 'Twinned with Amsterdam' which I think is kind of ambitious and trying something new. ... so if it ends up badly, I'll post it here.
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Post by James on Mar 17, 2014 15:39:58 GMT -5
For Harold Pinter
With a roll of his wrist, the tiny, red dwarf pitches outside off-stump.
The stitches that keep the star from breaking apart, grip and turn on the dusty, cracked road.
Already, though, as if the willow has slowly turned to sturdier bone, Hutton’s sword has made its fatal flourish.
A flash of red, a solitary, strangled shout from out somewhere in the field, and the ball is up, up, returning to the stars.
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