Down the Rabbit Hole

[Sensar]

down the rabbit hole

i often wonder
if we're just plunging down a rabbit hole
just like alice
but how fast do we fall
until we reach that wonder below?
some float
some speed
i wish i would float
so i could reach out
and grab the orange marmalade

[Sensar]

water

i've always wondered about water
the way it wraps and turns
the sheets and currents
the enveloping warmth
or shattering cold
and how one thing can be so many different things
at the same
weird
huh

[Kaez]

(( These are subtle, short, light-heated, innocent, and humorous. I approve completely. Continue. ))

[Sensar]

Oct 12, 2009 20:32:27 GMT -5 Kaez said:

(( These are subtle, short, light-heated, innocent, and humorous. I approve completely. Continue. ))

((Thank you. They're completely off the top of my head, so when inspiration hits, it surely will appear here.))

[Lilam]

((I like how the water one is shaped like a tornado/hurricane kinda' sorta'. I dunno... small things amuse me. ;D))

[Kaez]

Oct 12, 2009 22:10:27 GMT -5 Lilam said:

((I like how the water one is shaped like a tornado/hurricane kinda' sorta'. I dunno... small things amuse me. ;D))

(( THE ONE ABOVE IT LOOKS LIKE A MUSHROOM CLOUD!!! ))

[Sensar]

((O.O

I must be very deep.))

[Sensar]

epiphany

that sudden realization
that you now know
what you did not before.
what madness allows
us people to be
flashed to truth
so subjective to our eyes?

[ASGetty ((Zovo))]

Oct 12, 2009 22:10:27 GMT -5 Lilam said:

((I like how the water one is shaped like a tornado/hurricane kinda' sorta'. I dunno... small things amuse me. ;D))

I thought that was intended.
Looks like an arrow pointing down, breaking the surface.

I like this Sensar, well done.

[Sensar]

the dance

stepping to that music
ethereally drifting through the air
and the rush of notes
the wafting tones
and the beauty of song
it makes me wonder
who controls the dance?

[ARSmith ((Wolfeh))]

[[ I love your poems, sir. :] Especially 'The Dance'. Very airy and enjoyable. ]]

[Kaez]

(( Best yet, that one. ))

[ARSmith ((Wolfeh))]

Oct 15, 2009 11:51:37 GMT -5 Kaez said:

(( Best yet, that one. ))

[[ I agree. Keep writing, Mr. Sensar! :] I'm certainly routing for you! ]]

[Sensar]

walking

moving forward
the momentum of speed
with confidence and pride
or the slow monotony
of depression and regret.
i've always liked walking
and how many forms it can take
the malleable energy
of just walking

[ASGetty ((Zovo))]

You know one of the things I like about your work here Sensar, is that it is invariably you.

For every forum poster here there is a little voice in my head which is just a touch different for all of them. Sometimes, when they write; when I read it that little voice changes and their Random Banter and their written work don't have the feeling that they are created by the same person. With you, it's different. Your poetry voice and your banter voice are identical; and I love reading your work.

FYI: minor spelling error, 7th line. "In" vs. "it."