The Drall
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Post by The Drall on Jun 27, 2010 20:20:42 GMT -5
Well, I must say, Episode 1 is excellent and makes me REALLY want to read more. I spotted maybe one mistake, but I've forgotten where it is. Good on you.
I think this is some excellent writing, here. Hopefully, I'll have some criticism at some point during this, probably by the time this story is done. We can only hope.
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Post by The Drall on Jun 27, 2010 20:25:03 GMT -5
Say, Zovo, would you mind me maybe writing a backstory to Drallion? It's an idea that's bubbling around. I have no idea if I'll follow through with it, but whatever.
Also, will you be continuing the story you put up for the Assignment?
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Post by ASGetty ((Zovo)) on Jun 27, 2010 20:37:26 GMT -5
Say, Zovo, would you mind me maybe writing a backstory to Drallion? It's an idea that's bubbling around. I have no idea if I'll follow through with it, but whatever. Also, will you be continuing the story you put up for the Assignment? I'm kicking around some ideas for going back and telling the story of things that came before the piece I submitted for the writing assignment. This will likely lead to some ammendments to the actual piece I submitted (the trio's passage throgh the Grove); and then finally I'd like to follow the story arc to it's eciting conclusion. Most of it is still in the brainstorming phase. I've laid out some pretty arbitrary story points in the writing assignment piece; a trio of adventures, an army of trolls, bounty hunters, etc. just because they sounded good in that little excerpt. Now I have to try to write a story which incorporates those same elements in some coherent (and preferably non-cliche) manner. So I need to determine how the trio came together, why the trolls have come together, why they want King James the Red, and all the little details in between. But yes, I do intend to continue.
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Post by The Drall on Jun 27, 2010 20:52:56 GMT -5
Sounds awesome, looking forward to it!
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Post by Kaez on Jun 28, 2010 18:37:32 GMT -5
Good news -- got the prologue for Episode 4 written, and it's something like 650 words. So that was nice for 'getting back into the swing of things'. On route to picking things up again :][:
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Post by Blu on Jul 1, 2010 5:24:39 GMT -5
So, if I was looking to join A World Removed, what information would I need to know, and how would I go about it?
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Post by ASGetty ((Zovo)) on Jul 1, 2010 14:45:14 GMT -5
Just PM me with ideas and we'll talk. I recommend reading some of the other threads as well as Kaez's "The Grove" and my own "Excerpt" to get an idea of the aesthetic we're aiming for.
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Post by Sensar on Jul 5, 2010 1:31:12 GMT -5
Works by Sensaro
The Golden Geese; King Pear; Teeny Cod, the Angel Fish of Sweet Meat; A Late Winters Day Thought; Solar Line
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Post by ASGetty ((Zovo)) on Jul 5, 2010 19:42:59 GMT -5
If you want your own thread (ie: The Collected Works of Sensaro) you're welcome to create one.
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Post by tamwyn on Jul 26, 2010 11:02:59 GMT -5
So...how is this going?
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Post by ASGetty ((Zovo)) on Jul 26, 2010 14:32:06 GMT -5
Slowly. . . I'm actually having trouble building a story. I've got some vague ideas about where I want it to go, but getting to B when I haven't yet sorted out where A is is a pain int he butt.
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Post by tamwyn on Jul 26, 2010 15:34:14 GMT -5
Want me to help with that?
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Post by ASGetty ((Zovo)) on Jul 26, 2010 16:00:53 GMT -5
Want me to help with that? Not just yet. I need to find time to just sit down and write on it. Usually my brain fills in the gaps.
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Post by tamwyn on Jul 26, 2010 16:02:44 GMT -5
Alright, well, I'm always here for anything you wanna throw at me.
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Post by ASGetty ((Zovo)) on Jul 26, 2010 16:05:45 GMT -5
Alright, well, I'm always here for anything you wanna throw at me. I've already thrown things at you. Lets keep your ideas in the creative reservior until we can use them on the other project.
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