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Post by James on Sept 7, 2016 22:10:04 GMT -5
I really admired the use of black space in your story, Matteo. It allowed me to use my imagination to fill in the gaps. Sometimes I think you pushed it a little far. I'm not saying to change too much, but certainly I think just writing the odd word may have given your story slightly more colour. Still, I think I'm going to give the win to Matteo here. Adam's story was strong, but Matteo's willingness to experiment with the very idea of a story's existence was compelling. Great work. That certainly sounds like the kind of shit Pete would write. I did my best. |
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Post by James on Sept 8, 2016 23:04:09 GMT -5
Deadline in roughly three hours. Seven stories to go...
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Post by Ad Absurdum on Sept 8, 2016 23:42:37 GMT -5
I posted mine up tonight, but I need to fix the formatting and add italics to some things, so I ask that you read it tomorrow, if any one actually planned on reading it tonight. I'd do it now, but I have to be up in six hours, so...yeah...
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Post by The Counter Cultist(Sawyer) on Sept 9, 2016 0:42:59 GMT -5
Well it could use a little more punching up, but I still posted it.
I won't say I'm happy with it. But considering I got a cold, had my shift schedule changed at last minute, and I kept fucking changing my god damn idea(curse you active imagination) mid project, I'm just happy I got something in at all.
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Post by Inkdrinker on Sept 9, 2016 0:53:32 GMT -5
Unfortunately, I'm gonna have to forfeit this round. Week ended up being a lot more hectic than I anticipated.
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Post by James on Sept 9, 2016 1:02:03 GMT -5
Noooooooooo!
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Post by Sensar on Sept 9, 2016 1:41:43 GMT -5
Alright, it's in. I'm not thrilled, but it's passable.
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Post by Kaez on Sept 9, 2016 3:15:39 GMT -5
Unfortunately, I'm gonna have to forfeit this round. Week ended up being a lot more hectic than I anticipated. Bahh. I really hope that's the last time that happens. Sorry to hear it. Round 2 is up! Picture round! |
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Post by The Counter Cultist(Sawyer) on Sept 9, 2016 4:55:50 GMT -5
hehehehehehehhehehehehehehe
there is no incriminating quote here
EDIT: Though I'll admit, Bench and Canary are pretty enticing.
...ima have to save those pictures and write something later.
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Post by J.O.N ((Dragonwing)) on Sept 9, 2016 5:29:15 GMT -5
From the people writing about lighthouses, hopefully this helps:
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Post by The Counter Cultist(Sawyer) on Sept 9, 2016 10:08:32 GMT -5
...the fuck did I just watch?
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Post by ASGetty ((Zovo)) on Sept 9, 2016 10:22:21 GMT -5
From the people writing about lighthouses, hopefully this helps: I was just thinking about this shit last night. |
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Post by Sensar on Sept 9, 2016 12:03:12 GMT -5
Loving my and Taed's painting.
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Post by ASGetty ((Zovo)) on Sept 9, 2016 12:49:14 GMT -5
Mother fucking Ferngully.
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Post by The Counter Cultist(Sawyer) on Sept 9, 2016 15:45:28 GMT -5
Mother fucking Ferngully. God that movie and It embedded a very respectful fear of Tim Curry's voice when I was a wee lad. fucking awesome and terrifying. |
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