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Post by Sekot on Apr 5, 2015 18:49:41 GMT -5
I'm going to start rewriting this in the next couple of days, so any reviews here will still be helpful if you want to get an exchange going, Ad. I started reviewing it cause why not and umm Do you want a line by line edit or just a general impression? Edit: Not that I really know how to do a line-by-line edit, but as I'm reading it I'm looking at particular sentences and am marking them up for review.
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Post by James on Apr 5, 2015 18:59:52 GMT -5
I'm going to start rewriting this in the next couple of days, so any reviews here will still be helpful if you want to get an exchange going, Ad. I started reviewing it cause why not and umm Do you want a line by line edit or just a general impression? Edit: Not that I really know how to do a line-by-line edit, but as I'm reading it I'm looking at particular sentences and am marking them up for review. I really don't mind. Whatever you have time for. If you have time for a line-by-line and general impression review, that would be amazing and hugely appreciated.
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Post by Sekot on Apr 5, 2015 19:06:37 GMT -5
I started reviewing it cause why not and umm Do you want a line by line edit or just a general impression? Edit: Not that I really know how to do a line-by-line edit, but as I'm reading it I'm looking at particular sentences and am marking them up for review. I really don't mind. Whatever you have time for. If you have time for a line-by-line and general impression review, that would be amazing and hugely appreciated. So I lied. I can't do a line-by-line review and I'll tell you why but first: where do you want the review? Since its a document, I can probably write it into it. Or, if you'd like I can post it here (though that's against the rules), orrrrr I can put my general impressions in the Writing Thread.
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Post by James on Apr 5, 2015 19:09:37 GMT -5
In the Writing Thread is fine.
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Post by Ad Absurdum on Apr 6, 2015 0:30:11 GMT -5
Let me know if you want another review, James (Sekot's was quote comprehensive). I'd be happy to do an exchange!
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Post by James on Apr 6, 2015 3:45:49 GMT -5
I'm actually going to pull my thing from the Exchange for now. Partly because I'm going to start rewriting, and partly because I might be around here slightly less for the next couple of days, so I'm not sure I'd be able to review anything this week.
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