Lost Youth

[James]

Seriously. That just sums up what I just read.

[James]

The writing itself isn't bad. It's a bit generic but it's okay.

But your subject matter is, and has been for over a year, perverse. Deliberately so, I would venture to say.

[James]

Jun 19, 2012 3:38:06 GMT -5 James said:

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Let's start simple. Why did you write this story, Walder? What made you want to flesh out this story from the ideas in your mind? Agro seems to feel that you're writing is perverse, something I have to agree with, and unnecessarily so. What makes you want to share -these- types of stories? I can't think of many people who woul enjoy reading something needlessly perverse, similar to how some people do not want to read stories that have gruesome events, like child abuse for instance, just for the shock factor. You can dance around these things. Be subtle.

Would you enjoy reading this, Walder? Who's your audience?