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Post by ARSmith ((Wolfeh)) on Nov 11, 2010 22:54:45 GMT -5
1.) Sonnet of the Gods
Under the sun doth thine eye see
What power we bestow
Onto those who doth plead
For our might to grow.
Start out as a flame
Who doth gets animated
Into something unlame
And go forth unchallenged.
Go into thine world
With mine eye watching
As your destiny unfurls
Into something only I could have perceived.
I am the God who hath given the a gift
In which thy gift controls the course of Fate's gravitational shift.
Any comments? PM them to meee. Thanks. - Wolfeh
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Post by Meleta/Isoldaa on Nov 12, 2010 10:13:31 GMT -5
((Is there any particular reason you want responses in PMs Wolfeh, rather than posted here in the thread? ))
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Post by Meleta/Isoldaa on Nov 13, 2010 2:52:32 GMT -5
(( all righty hon - a PM, you have one!  )) |
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Post by ARSmith ((Wolfeh)) on Feb 8, 2011 0:01:36 GMT -5
I am the summoner and you are my champion,
Fighting a fight that is beyond your control,
Moving to swing your sword to my command,
And to move away from danger to my whim.
We are in a cord,
So tightly bound that we cannot escape.
Why do we fight?
Why are you rendered helpless?
We are in a cord.
We are fighting a war that is beyond our hand, only to find ourselves trapped,
Held accountable for the slaughter,
While you, the champion, do it by your forced play.
(( ... Unfinished, but inspired by League of Legends. >w> ))
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Post by Jackal on Feb 8, 2011 0:41:01 GMT -5
LoL. Dang, I miss that game.
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Post by ARSmith ((Wolfeh)) on Feb 8, 2011 23:54:48 GMT -5
I love it. <3 WW, Kayle, Morgana, and Cho'Gath are my favorites.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 9, 2011 0:05:33 GMT -5
Blitzcrank!!
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Post by ARSmith ((Wolfeh)) on Feb 9, 2011 22:56:05 GMT -5
Booya!
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Post by ARSmith ((Wolfeh)) on Feb 23, 2011 23:30:11 GMT -5
.: The Deed is Done :.
Lucid are the waves that crash onto the shore,
Which soaks the sand and washes away the Sin.
It is believed to be calming in those final hours,
When the light goes bleak and the sun dies beyond some horizon,
When Twilight falls and the moon is red,
And the children are no longer playing.
The red light illuminates upon my palms,
Coating them in it's crimson hue so I shall never forget,
That the waves are angry and I am reprehensible,
As the Sin floats away and leaves it's memory with me. |
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Post by Jackal on Feb 24, 2011 14:44:44 GMT -5
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Post by ARSmith ((Wolfeh)) on Feb 24, 2011 18:17:47 GMT -5
Warwick.
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Post by JMDavis ((Silver)) on Feb 24, 2011 19:30:49 GMT -5
Sion, Vlad, Olaf, Swain and very soon... JARVAN!
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Post by Jenny (Reffy) on Mar 1, 2011 5:43:53 GMT -5
While I liked the latest poem I think it might use a little spit-shine. It was definitely mournful, in a way, and you carried the sin part of it very well. I was also left wondering just exactly what had happened - although from my guess a lot of murders >.> So kudos on that bit!
Look at:
When the light goes bleak and the sun dies beyond some horizon,
Some horizon? Makes it sound altogether too flippant for something so very heavy. You also say pretty much the same thing in the next sentence - so be wary of that!
Much love <3
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Post by ARSmith ((Wolfeh)) on Mar 1, 2011 20:32:12 GMT -5
Well, I had a dream, and it went a lot like that. Very vague.  |
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Post by Jenny (Reffy) on Mar 2, 2011 5:58:14 GMT -5
Vague here was good! Don't get me wrong <3 I like that you don't give the reader everything and kinda let them decide. A lot of flash fictions are set-up that way (and poems). Just think a spit-shine might help it a bit :] <3
(... That dream, thinking about it, sounds frickin' scary!)
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