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Fred.
Nov 23, 2009 16:03:30 GMT -5
Post by Rebecca Flynn on Nov 23, 2009 16:03:30 GMT -5
There once was a zombie named Fred
Who was neither alive nor was dead,
But his reflex delayed when he met with a blade
And away down the hill rolled Fred's Head!
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Fred.
Nov 23, 2009 17:19:20 GMT -5
Post by o ding on Nov 23, 2009 17:19:20 GMT -5
I endorse this.
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Fred.
Nov 23, 2009 22:16:42 GMT -5
Post by ARSmith ((Wolfeh)) on Nov 23, 2009 22:16:42 GMT -5
Hehe... 5/5. <3
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Fred.
Dec 4, 2009 16:52:06 GMT -5
Post by Jenny (Reffy) on Dec 4, 2009 16:52:06 GMT -5
Awesome 5/5  Love ditties like this - please can we have more? |
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Fred.
Dec 4, 2009 17:11:22 GMT -5
Post by Dylaria on Dec 4, 2009 17:11:22 GMT -5
Is it strange that the word I would use for this is cute? I thought it snagged ever so slightly since the end words all rhymed besides "blade" but I can't really think of a way to fix that. Besides, it didn't really take anything away from the piece itself.
As an added bonus I can almost read this aloud to the tune of "Hickory Dickory Dock" which intentional or not is nice and adds to the fun of the piece. Seriously, if you take out the "was" in line two I'm pretty sure it fits.
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Love ditties like this - please can we have more?
