Post by Appolix on Oct 29, 2009 20:19:52 GMT -5
This is an assignment i have due for English class it is suppose to be like a short story using no violence mine is 4 pages in Microsoft Word and we couldn't use guns at all or knifes and weapons so i just wanted to share it with you guys. Also we had to include our teachers so that is why they are in here in case your wondering.
[Newport Demon Dog Investigations/u]
Newport Demon Dog Investigations
The day is October 30th 2009 at 11:55 and the group is ready for one of their hardest investigations yet. The Newport Demon Dog is a myth that is suppose to come out of a portal and into the real world at midnight on Halloween for just 1 minute. The group consists of 2 plumbers and 4 teachers the teachers were Mr. Sutton a tall man in his mid 40’s with brown hair, Mr. Sutton a tall man with black hair in his 30’s, Mr. Cormier a tall man in his 30’s and has black hair, and Mrs. Andrews a tall women with long black hair. The plumbers were Jake Roferbing a tall skinny man in his mid 20’s and Nick Forte a tall man chunky man in his late 40’s. “Are you ready.” Said Jake the leader of the group. The clock strikes midnight “Wow that is extremely freaky.” Said Nick.
Out of nowhere a vortex appears and out comes a dog, not a small one but a big one with green flames coming out. It snorts and out comes fire. The group backs away as Mrs. Andrews whispers to the camera holder Mr. Sutton “Quick get a picture Mr. Sutton before it goes away.” The group backs up slowly and silently some more not to anger the dog as Mr. Sutton snaps a picture with a blinding flash. The dog didn’t like the blinding flash as it snorts again and gets angry the dog got so angry that he started charging at the group. “Run!” yelled Mr. Fortune and Mr. Cormier simultaneously. “Don’t worry it goes away at 12:01 said Nick. The clock tics 12:01 and the group sighs with relief it was the longest minute it felt like they have ever had to wait. The spinning green vortex opens up again and the dog keeps running after them instead of going to the vortex to return home. The minute seems so short as the clock strikes 12:02 the portal is gone it is still Halloween and the portal does not come back until midnight on November 1st so they are stuck with the dog for the rest of Halloween….
The group runs out of the cave and right into downtown Newport Rhode Island there are cars everywhere even at night people are either going home from work late at night or traveling for the well known holiday Halloween. The dog is right behind them as they jump he strikes Mr. Suttons camera and Mr. Sutton falls to the ground as the group comes to a halt in traffic. “Quick let go of the camera” says Mrs. Andrews. “But what about the pictures then we will never have proof of this ever existing.” Replies Mr. Sutton in an outraged voice. “Forget the cameras there are enough proof so save yourself or he will probably bring you through the vortex.” Mr. Sutton looks around and sees the eyewitness news. This made the dog more enraged and he kept on chasing them.
Nick was struggling behind the group with the dog right behind him well he was a good 1 minute behind his group. “Great the dog is right behind me and im so tired and im not even within the safety of the group I would need to run 2 times faster then them for 1 minute to catch up and that will never happen with my speed.” Thought Nick to himself. Nick is lucky he sees a bright green Seven Eleven with a bright sign saying “We are open all day Halloween so pick up your last minute Halloween candies today.” Nick sees the sign and runs right in, as he gets in a tall man yells at him “NO RUNNING!!” He keeps on running up the snack and drink isle as he takes 5 chocolate bars that are suppose to give you energy and 2 energy drinks he is tackled by the man who was running the counter and the dog rips the man off of him. “This isn’t good.” thought Nick. A brown shaped bone goes flying into the water next to them as the dog shakes his tail happy and Jumps into the water. “You think we would forget about you Nick.” Says Nick. “You keep those” says the man. “We need to keep running at least across the bridge and into my Jamestown home.” “Oh no im missing my brown trench coat I think the dog took it.” Well then we really need to keep going or he will track us down with your scent.” said Jake.
It was 3pm and they were safe for now in Jakes home. “Anyone want some hot chocolate” says Jake. “Uh guys that doesn’t look good” said Nick who’s eyes were glued to the TV screen. The dog was running across the Newport bridge with Nick’s scent on his coat. “The dog is on his way here?!” says Mr. Fortune. “We definitely need to go he looks even madder then before.” says Jake. “I agree” said everyone simultaneously. “OK then it is agreed we cross the Newport bridge and don’t stop running until we hit the Coastguard Station in North Kingstown and then the dog will be there’s to take care of until midnight.” The TV was shut off instantly the group got their shoes and sweatshirts on as they walk out the front door Jake making sure it is locked.
There was a huge amount of traffic on the bridge and the dog was near them again so they were playing dodge the traffic and avoid getting killed by a vicious dog until midnight. They couldn’t hear the dog because of the honking on the cars and people hitting their brakes they didn’t dare look behind. The dog jumps and his face connects with the bumper breaker of a car and his foot meets the front tire of the care. The dog just shakes it off and is even enraged more. There is a guy who almost hits Nick one almost hits Mr. Cormier they are finally of the bridge but they still have to run on the road because of tough terrain and rocky hills. The group is tired and it is 7pm it’s getting dark so they will have trouble sticking together. The group thinks they have everyone as they are at the coast guard station but they are missing Jake and the dog is nowhere in sight. They wait another hour as it is 8pm the sky is blackened and the weather has taken a turn for the worse too. The coastguard has sent out a search and rescue squad they report back at 11:59 pm after a thorough search through the water things seem hopeless but Jake is still alive and is with the dog going into an alternate universe.
The vortex opens back in the cave and a solider appears out of it, Jake is amazed as he sees a long dead famous and crazy World War 2 veteran. “Good Job Comet you caught the intruders now we can bring back to our universe to make our slaves until he dies and then a master when he dies.” says the solider. “Anything you want to say intruder before you go to our universe?” “Yes why are you here and why do you act like you own this place.” “Because I do I’m a solider from World War 2 and this was used as an army base were the Army men would keep there weapons and this is my dog that was killed in combat from intruders when I died I resurrected him in this form to keep humans out of hear like you that heard of the rumor that quickly spread about the base. I wanted to have the rumor stopped and make the new one be that a demon dog comes out twice a year midnight on Halloween and midnight on November 1st. I made this possible by making a vortex that Comet can use to go from the afterlife to the real world. Now enough talk lets go.”
Back at the base….. “Well I guess that is what they did with him” said army general Mac Marneuy. “We made a portal that would be used only if something like this were to happen so you need to jump to a universe were all the bad spirits go when they die which is were he is being taken.” “Ok it will be me Nick and Mrs. Andrews going to the other universe” said the new leader Mr. Sutton. The portal opens and Private Mark went with them as there only weapon man. They step through the blue vortex portal and find a hot dry place filled with live people as workers and the dead ones as the masters.
“Who are you” Yells out a spirits voice. “FBI we are here to take back a person brought here by an accident.” Said Private Mark. “No chance everyone here is a slave until they die and guess what so are you now.” Jake spots them punches the dog watching him in the snout and makes a run for it. The guards are trying to tackle him but they go right through him. “Unleash the dogs!” Cries out a voice. Sergeant Mark lays down a trap and as the dog runs by it there is a huge explosion of ice as the dogs are freezed into a block of ice. The portal is thrown down and everyone gets through safely.
“Was that necessary to freeze the dogs.” Says Jake. “Don’t worry it only freezes for 1 hour and there flames go away permanently. The group says there goodbyes for now until there next investigation and is happy to get proof on there best and most dangerous investigation yet…
[Newport Demon Dog Investigations/u]
Newport Demon Dog Investigations
The day is October 30th 2009 at 11:55 and the group is ready for one of their hardest investigations yet. The Newport Demon Dog is a myth that is suppose to come out of a portal and into the real world at midnight on Halloween for just 1 minute. The group consists of 2 plumbers and 4 teachers the teachers were Mr. Sutton a tall man in his mid 40’s with brown hair, Mr. Sutton a tall man with black hair in his 30’s, Mr. Cormier a tall man in his 30’s and has black hair, and Mrs. Andrews a tall women with long black hair. The plumbers were Jake Roferbing a tall skinny man in his mid 20’s and Nick Forte a tall man chunky man in his late 40’s. “Are you ready.” Said Jake the leader of the group. The clock strikes midnight “Wow that is extremely freaky.” Said Nick.
Out of nowhere a vortex appears and out comes a dog, not a small one but a big one with green flames coming out. It snorts and out comes fire. The group backs away as Mrs. Andrews whispers to the camera holder Mr. Sutton “Quick get a picture Mr. Sutton before it goes away.” The group backs up slowly and silently some more not to anger the dog as Mr. Sutton snaps a picture with a blinding flash. The dog didn’t like the blinding flash as it snorts again and gets angry the dog got so angry that he started charging at the group. “Run!” yelled Mr. Fortune and Mr. Cormier simultaneously. “Don’t worry it goes away at 12:01 said Nick. The clock tics 12:01 and the group sighs with relief it was the longest minute it felt like they have ever had to wait. The spinning green vortex opens up again and the dog keeps running after them instead of going to the vortex to return home. The minute seems so short as the clock strikes 12:02 the portal is gone it is still Halloween and the portal does not come back until midnight on November 1st so they are stuck with the dog for the rest of Halloween….
The group runs out of the cave and right into downtown Newport Rhode Island there are cars everywhere even at night people are either going home from work late at night or traveling for the well known holiday Halloween. The dog is right behind them as they jump he strikes Mr. Suttons camera and Mr. Sutton falls to the ground as the group comes to a halt in traffic. “Quick let go of the camera” says Mrs. Andrews. “But what about the pictures then we will never have proof of this ever existing.” Replies Mr. Sutton in an outraged voice. “Forget the cameras there are enough proof so save yourself or he will probably bring you through the vortex.” Mr. Sutton looks around and sees the eyewitness news. This made the dog more enraged and he kept on chasing them.
Nick was struggling behind the group with the dog right behind him well he was a good 1 minute behind his group. “Great the dog is right behind me and im so tired and im not even within the safety of the group I would need to run 2 times faster then them for 1 minute to catch up and that will never happen with my speed.” Thought Nick to himself. Nick is lucky he sees a bright green Seven Eleven with a bright sign saying “We are open all day Halloween so pick up your last minute Halloween candies today.” Nick sees the sign and runs right in, as he gets in a tall man yells at him “NO RUNNING!!” He keeps on running up the snack and drink isle as he takes 5 chocolate bars that are suppose to give you energy and 2 energy drinks he is tackled by the man who was running the counter and the dog rips the man off of him. “This isn’t good.” thought Nick. A brown shaped bone goes flying into the water next to them as the dog shakes his tail happy and Jumps into the water. “You think we would forget about you Nick.” Says Nick. “You keep those” says the man. “We need to keep running at least across the bridge and into my Jamestown home.” “Oh no im missing my brown trench coat I think the dog took it.” Well then we really need to keep going or he will track us down with your scent.” said Jake.
It was 3pm and they were safe for now in Jakes home. “Anyone want some hot chocolate” says Jake. “Uh guys that doesn’t look good” said Nick who’s eyes were glued to the TV screen. The dog was running across the Newport bridge with Nick’s scent on his coat. “The dog is on his way here?!” says Mr. Fortune. “We definitely need to go he looks even madder then before.” says Jake. “I agree” said everyone simultaneously. “OK then it is agreed we cross the Newport bridge and don’t stop running until we hit the Coastguard Station in North Kingstown and then the dog will be there’s to take care of until midnight.” The TV was shut off instantly the group got their shoes and sweatshirts on as they walk out the front door Jake making sure it is locked.
There was a huge amount of traffic on the bridge and the dog was near them again so they were playing dodge the traffic and avoid getting killed by a vicious dog until midnight. They couldn’t hear the dog because of the honking on the cars and people hitting their brakes they didn’t dare look behind. The dog jumps and his face connects with the bumper breaker of a car and his foot meets the front tire of the care. The dog just shakes it off and is even enraged more. There is a guy who almost hits Nick one almost hits Mr. Cormier they are finally of the bridge but they still have to run on the road because of tough terrain and rocky hills. The group is tired and it is 7pm it’s getting dark so they will have trouble sticking together. The group thinks they have everyone as they are at the coast guard station but they are missing Jake and the dog is nowhere in sight. They wait another hour as it is 8pm the sky is blackened and the weather has taken a turn for the worse too. The coastguard has sent out a search and rescue squad they report back at 11:59 pm after a thorough search through the water things seem hopeless but Jake is still alive and is with the dog going into an alternate universe.
The vortex opens back in the cave and a solider appears out of it, Jake is amazed as he sees a long dead famous and crazy World War 2 veteran. “Good Job Comet you caught the intruders now we can bring back to our universe to make our slaves until he dies and then a master when he dies.” says the solider. “Anything you want to say intruder before you go to our universe?” “Yes why are you here and why do you act like you own this place.” “Because I do I’m a solider from World War 2 and this was used as an army base were the Army men would keep there weapons and this is my dog that was killed in combat from intruders when I died I resurrected him in this form to keep humans out of hear like you that heard of the rumor that quickly spread about the base. I wanted to have the rumor stopped and make the new one be that a demon dog comes out twice a year midnight on Halloween and midnight on November 1st. I made this possible by making a vortex that Comet can use to go from the afterlife to the real world. Now enough talk lets go.”
Back at the base….. “Well I guess that is what they did with him” said army general Mac Marneuy. “We made a portal that would be used only if something like this were to happen so you need to jump to a universe were all the bad spirits go when they die which is were he is being taken.” “Ok it will be me Nick and Mrs. Andrews going to the other universe” said the new leader Mr. Sutton. The portal opens and Private Mark went with them as there only weapon man. They step through the blue vortex portal and find a hot dry place filled with live people as workers and the dead ones as the masters.
“Who are you” Yells out a spirits voice. “FBI we are here to take back a person brought here by an accident.” Said Private Mark. “No chance everyone here is a slave until they die and guess what so are you now.” Jake spots them punches the dog watching him in the snout and makes a run for it. The guards are trying to tackle him but they go right through him. “Unleash the dogs!” Cries out a voice. Sergeant Mark lays down a trap and as the dog runs by it there is a huge explosion of ice as the dogs are freezed into a block of ice. The portal is thrown down and everyone gets through safely.
“Was that necessary to freeze the dogs.” Says Jake. “Don’t worry it only freezes for 1 hour and there flames go away permanently. The group says there goodbyes for now until there next investigation and is happy to get proof on there best and most dangerous investigation yet…
