Slayer
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Who the hell is my avatar?!?!
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Post by Slayer on Aug 10, 2009 0:39:48 GMT -5
You say it's so calming, You say it's the shit. I come to your house and take a short hit. All goes well, the first minute or so, then the cogs in my mind, begin to twist and go. Paranoia slowly sets in, out comes a monster with ten thousand chins, and several hundred fins. Kicking and screaming, I run out of your house. Being chased by a gigantic, buffalo mouse! You say your pot, is quite the delight, All I can say, is that it gave me quite the fright. THIS is what happens when I have nothing to do at night...
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Post by Jenny (Reffy) on Sept 8, 2009 19:29:21 GMT -5
LOVE IT! Dude - Mr Slayer - You are a God Only comment I could make is about spacing. I would have keep the two short sentences, then one long going [see first paragraph] It would have made it bounce better with the rhythm Wouldn't take much to fix that. Heheh - Buffalo mouse!
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Arlyan
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/facepalm
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Post by Arlyan on Sept 14, 2009 21:52:15 GMT -5
Methinks he mixed it with Salvia
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