Post by Virus on Mar 8, 2009 18:54:03 GMT -5
(( I'm aware that I've posted this before, but it's gone through alot of editing (and probably will go through alot more by the time im finished) so I figured it would be easiest to just post it again. Im finally done with school, and a friend of mine reminded me about this story and rekindled my interest. So. Here it comes, a fresh version of "The Three", posted in chapters just like last time. Any and all criticism is very much appreciated I am well aware that I am terrible at picking names for... everything. ))
One
Faeron awoke with the sun, as he did every morning. He lived on a farm with his father and two brothers, about five miles from Eigo, his village. His dark brown hair was just long enough to cover his pointed elven ears. He lay still for another fifteen minutes before getting out of his bed and pulling on a shirt.
Every day for the past three years, Faeron had been training at Eigo’s academy. The “Academy”, as it had come to be called over the years, was Eigo’s intense military school. Of all of the villages in the area, Eigo held by far the strongest military. Faeron was the quickest, brightest and strongest student by far that had attended for many years. Even as he was being trained, he was climbing the ranks in the… perhaps military would be the right term. No other student had ever been officially offered an officer rank before graduating the academy, yet Faeron showed skill that could not help but be noticed.
There was a mission today, and as always, he was selected as team leader. His group consisted of the other top seven students in the academy.
Academy students… not ideal but they will have to due. I wonder what our assignment will be.
Faeron entered the small room that he had been summoned to countless times. He looked around to see hundreds of books lining the walls, and an elderly man sitting at a desk, staring at a pile of paperwork that Faeron was not envious of. After a few minutes, the man looked up, acknowledged Faeron, and proceeded to file the papers away, paying next to no attention to him. Faeron had been through the routine before, and patiently waited to be briefed. The man situated himself, took a long quaff of what appeared to be hot tea, and proceeded to give Faeron the details of his assignment.
“Faeron. We have received a tip off that a roving group of bandits has been causing trouble in the neighboring villages. So far they have attacked two villages: Tel Mucus and Kotoba. They are expected to strike Ohayo next. That is where we recommend you start. As always, be careful.” Faeron committed everything he was told to memory before turning to leave the room.
Another milk run… why do they continue to give me these novice assignments?
He relayed the mission to his comrades, and they began making preparations to leave. Faeron trudged back to his house. It was a very small, two room residence that was very scantily decorated and furnished. His entire family was of a military background, and they kept only what they needed to live in their house, as none of them ever spent more than a few days home at a time. The higher ranking officers were kind enough to schedule their leave at the same time so that they could see each other, at least briefly.
Faeron changed into his navy blue leather uniform, and took his two swords off of the weapon rack that his father had built in the main room of their house. The swords were passed down to him from his father. They were thinner than most swords, but impossible to break. Ever since they were given to him, a few months shy of five years earlier, he had never sharpened them and according to his father, in the thirty years he had possession of them, they had never worn down. He packed a small haversack with food and supplies that would be needed for the journey, slung it over his back to accompany his swords, and headed out the door.
By the time Faeron reached the village gates, the rest of his group were ready to leave. It was a full day’s journey so, without wasting any more time, he led the way to Ohayo, the closest of Eigo’s ally villages.
“ Keep your eyes out for the usual. You know the drill.”, he instructed his men, “I want two runners scouting, one on each side of the path”.
They trudged on down the path. One of the scouts brought back news of a farm that had been burnt to the ground. The farmers who tended it had been killed and burned along with the building. After a short while, they came across a heavy concentration of fresh tracks.
“At least we know we’re going the right way.” One of the students remarked.
As they closed the distance between themselves and the village, Faeron ordered more scouts out ahead of them. When they reached Ohayo, it was evident that it had already been attacked. The smell of death was in the air, and a few men could be seen burying the dead.
Faeron strode up to one of the men and said “My name’s Faeron… I was dispatched from Eigo. What happened here?”
The man refused to look at Faeron, and he could tell by the shaking of his shoulders that he was crying, though no sound was heard. He gave his report in a true emotionless military manner.
“We were sleeping when they came. If they were just bandits we would have had no problem defending ourselves, even with a disadvantage. They were dressed as bandits, common thieves, but there was a monster of a man leading them. He must have been eight feet tall. They swept through and took everything. Anyone who stood up to them was killed. It was all over in a matter of minutes. After they got what they wanted they…” here he paused and very audibly sobbed. He eventually subsided and continued in a much less professional way “…they burned all the buildings. They locked many of the men inside ole’ Maron’s house and torched it. My brother was in there.”
Faeron didn’t know what to say. He was trained in combat, not in consolation. He could no longer stand watching the man cry.
“Which way did they go?” he asked as the man bawled.
No words came, but the man’s hand rose and a single finger pointed down the road that Faeron and the others had just come from.
“No… are you sure? We just came from there.” The man nodded, and again pointed down the road.
Faeron yelled at his men “Hurry! They’re headed back towards Eigo! We have to get there before them!” They ran full speed down the road and didn’t stop until the village was in sight. It was lit ablaze. The academy students walked aimlessly around the village, but Faeron didn’t even stop, he kept running, all the way to his house.
He got there just as the massive leader of the bandits threw a torch onto his home. He saw the limp bodies of his father and brothers being dragged towards the burning house, and drew his weapons. Every bandit that stood in his way was cut down in an instant, but he was too late. They were already dead and burning. The bandit leader laughed as he watched the house go up in flames. Faeron charged at him, whirling his blades and jumping to stab the murderer. Faeron didn’t even see the movement, but he found his swords locked with the bandit’s. He pulled back and attacked with all of his strength, but every blow he tried to land was easily deflected by the bandit. His blades searched frantically for a hit, but none was found.
This man was clearly a master, and knew it. Faeron was beginning to feel the fatigue of running a full day’s journey in a matter of hours. His movements slowed, and eventually he was too exhausted to move. He panted for breath, kneeling on the ground in front of the bandit leader. The massive man sheathed his weapon and crouched down in front of Faeron. Tears ran freely down Faeron’s face as he whispered into his ear words that he would never forget.
“You fought with passion that I have never seen. Even though you are weak, you will grow stronger every day. For this reason, I let you live.” And with that, the bandit’s fist filled his vision, and he was knocked unconscious…
One
Faeron awoke with the sun, as he did every morning. He lived on a farm with his father and two brothers, about five miles from Eigo, his village. His dark brown hair was just long enough to cover his pointed elven ears. He lay still for another fifteen minutes before getting out of his bed and pulling on a shirt.
Every day for the past three years, Faeron had been training at Eigo’s academy. The “Academy”, as it had come to be called over the years, was Eigo’s intense military school. Of all of the villages in the area, Eigo held by far the strongest military. Faeron was the quickest, brightest and strongest student by far that had attended for many years. Even as he was being trained, he was climbing the ranks in the… perhaps military would be the right term. No other student had ever been officially offered an officer rank before graduating the academy, yet Faeron showed skill that could not help but be noticed.
There was a mission today, and as always, he was selected as team leader. His group consisted of the other top seven students in the academy.
Academy students… not ideal but they will have to due. I wonder what our assignment will be.
Faeron entered the small room that he had been summoned to countless times. He looked around to see hundreds of books lining the walls, and an elderly man sitting at a desk, staring at a pile of paperwork that Faeron was not envious of. After a few minutes, the man looked up, acknowledged Faeron, and proceeded to file the papers away, paying next to no attention to him. Faeron had been through the routine before, and patiently waited to be briefed. The man situated himself, took a long quaff of what appeared to be hot tea, and proceeded to give Faeron the details of his assignment.
“Faeron. We have received a tip off that a roving group of bandits has been causing trouble in the neighboring villages. So far they have attacked two villages: Tel Mucus and Kotoba. They are expected to strike Ohayo next. That is where we recommend you start. As always, be careful.” Faeron committed everything he was told to memory before turning to leave the room.
Another milk run… why do they continue to give me these novice assignments?
He relayed the mission to his comrades, and they began making preparations to leave. Faeron trudged back to his house. It was a very small, two room residence that was very scantily decorated and furnished. His entire family was of a military background, and they kept only what they needed to live in their house, as none of them ever spent more than a few days home at a time. The higher ranking officers were kind enough to schedule their leave at the same time so that they could see each other, at least briefly.
Faeron changed into his navy blue leather uniform, and took his two swords off of the weapon rack that his father had built in the main room of their house. The swords were passed down to him from his father. They were thinner than most swords, but impossible to break. Ever since they were given to him, a few months shy of five years earlier, he had never sharpened them and according to his father, in the thirty years he had possession of them, they had never worn down. He packed a small haversack with food and supplies that would be needed for the journey, slung it over his back to accompany his swords, and headed out the door.
By the time Faeron reached the village gates, the rest of his group were ready to leave. It was a full day’s journey so, without wasting any more time, he led the way to Ohayo, the closest of Eigo’s ally villages.
“ Keep your eyes out for the usual. You know the drill.”, he instructed his men, “I want two runners scouting, one on each side of the path”.
They trudged on down the path. One of the scouts brought back news of a farm that had been burnt to the ground. The farmers who tended it had been killed and burned along with the building. After a short while, they came across a heavy concentration of fresh tracks.
“At least we know we’re going the right way.” One of the students remarked.
As they closed the distance between themselves and the village, Faeron ordered more scouts out ahead of them. When they reached Ohayo, it was evident that it had already been attacked. The smell of death was in the air, and a few men could be seen burying the dead.
Faeron strode up to one of the men and said “My name’s Faeron… I was dispatched from Eigo. What happened here?”
The man refused to look at Faeron, and he could tell by the shaking of his shoulders that he was crying, though no sound was heard. He gave his report in a true emotionless military manner.
“We were sleeping when they came. If they were just bandits we would have had no problem defending ourselves, even with a disadvantage. They were dressed as bandits, common thieves, but there was a monster of a man leading them. He must have been eight feet tall. They swept through and took everything. Anyone who stood up to them was killed. It was all over in a matter of minutes. After they got what they wanted they…” here he paused and very audibly sobbed. He eventually subsided and continued in a much less professional way “…they burned all the buildings. They locked many of the men inside ole’ Maron’s house and torched it. My brother was in there.”
Faeron didn’t know what to say. He was trained in combat, not in consolation. He could no longer stand watching the man cry.
“Which way did they go?” he asked as the man bawled.
No words came, but the man’s hand rose and a single finger pointed down the road that Faeron and the others had just come from.
“No… are you sure? We just came from there.” The man nodded, and again pointed down the road.
Faeron yelled at his men “Hurry! They’re headed back towards Eigo! We have to get there before them!” They ran full speed down the road and didn’t stop until the village was in sight. It was lit ablaze. The academy students walked aimlessly around the village, but Faeron didn’t even stop, he kept running, all the way to his house.
He got there just as the massive leader of the bandits threw a torch onto his home. He saw the limp bodies of his father and brothers being dragged towards the burning house, and drew his weapons. Every bandit that stood in his way was cut down in an instant, but he was too late. They were already dead and burning. The bandit leader laughed as he watched the house go up in flames. Faeron charged at him, whirling his blades and jumping to stab the murderer. Faeron didn’t even see the movement, but he found his swords locked with the bandit’s. He pulled back and attacked with all of his strength, but every blow he tried to land was easily deflected by the bandit. His blades searched frantically for a hit, but none was found.
This man was clearly a master, and knew it. Faeron was beginning to feel the fatigue of running a full day’s journey in a matter of hours. His movements slowed, and eventually he was too exhausted to move. He panted for breath, kneeling on the ground in front of the bandit leader. The massive man sheathed his weapon and crouched down in front of Faeron. Tears ran freely down Faeron’s face as he whispered into his ear words that he would never forget.
“You fought with passion that I have never seen. Even though you are weak, you will grow stronger every day. For this reason, I let you live.” And with that, the bandit’s fist filled his vision, and he was knocked unconscious…