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Post by ASGetty ((Zovo)) on Feb 2, 2015 14:43:37 GMT -5
Again, guys, super fucking busy lately and I'm sorry about that. Slowly finishing up Round 2, then I'll only be one round behind. Zovo, my plan is to review your Round 2 story last so that I can review your Round 3 story -first- and read them back to back. I see... Carry on. Sorry, don't take this as me rushing you. I'm just kind of interested in getting a progress report before I do the rest of the story. Decide if it's on course, full speed ahead, or if I'm drifting off target. |
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Post by James on Feb 2, 2015 15:41:39 GMT -5
We're next to be judged, Jor!
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Post by Deleted on Feb 2, 2015 17:34:11 GMT -5
We're next to be judged, Jor! I do love a good hard judging from a stern, younger man! |
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Post by JMDavis ((Silver)) on Feb 2, 2015 19:14:33 GMT -5
Blah. Not doing so well with this competition. Grats Silver! Thanks Ref! Just finished the flash, dunno if it's exactly 100% on the topic, but I think it's as close as I can get. As for the whole complaint about the words... I can't say that it'll get much better unless I either cut them out completely or have the topic 'Info-Dump'.  |
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Post by James on Feb 2, 2015 23:05:19 GMT -5
| ALPHA | ALPHA | ALPHA | BRAVO | BRAVO | BRAVO | Date | | Taed v Allya | Injin v Ink | Kwan v Dragon | Zovo v James | Reffy v Blood | Silver v Jor | 1/03 - 1/07 | | Taed v Ink | Injin v Kwan | Allya v Dragon | Zovo v Blood | Reffy v Silver | James v Jor | 1/08 - 1/12 | | Taed v Kwan | Injin v Dragon | Allya v Ink | Zovo v Silver | Reffy v Jor | James v Blood | 1/13 - 1/17 | | Taed v Dragon | Injin v Allya | Kwan v Ink | Zovo v Jor | Reffy v James | Silver v Blood | 1/18 - 1/22 | | Taed v Injin | Kwan v Allya | Dragon v Ink | Zovo v Reffy | Silver v James | Jor v Blood | 1/23 - 1/27 | | A1 v B2 |
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Winners so far in bold. |
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Post by Jenny (Reffy) on Feb 3, 2015 4:21:50 GMT -5
Thanks James  Losing oomph and will. |
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Post by Kaez on Feb 3, 2015 8:05:47 GMT -5
Thanks James Losing oomph and will. You lost Round 2 on a technicality. You won Round 3. And we've got a Flash round coming up. I see no reason to be bummed. I love the Mad City. Keep at it.  |
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Post by Jenny (Reffy) on Feb 3, 2015 9:00:16 GMT -5
Thanks James Losing oomph and will. You lost Round 2 on a technicality. You won Round 3. And we've got a Flash round coming up. I see no reason to be bummed. I love the Mad City. Keep at it. You're right. You always are. I'm probably just being melodramatic. Thanks. |
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Post by Kaez on Feb 3, 2015 11:03:43 GMT -5
You lost Round 2 on a technicality. You won Round 3. And we've got a Flash round coming up. I see no reason to be bummed. I love the Mad City. Keep at it. You're right. You always are. I'm probably just being melodramatic. Thanks. Two other points, which apply to you and everyone: 1) I'm just some jackass. Have more respect for the group-given opinions at Inklings than my individual feedback. 2) For some of you, like Ref, the sum is greater than the parts. This is about worldbuilding, not writing individual stories, and I think someone who writes quality individuals stories isn't necessarily creating a better world. |
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Post by ASGetty ((Zovo)) on Feb 3, 2015 17:33:17 GMT -5
Alright, idea for Round 4 just hit me.
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Post by James on Feb 4, 2015 3:12:06 GMT -5
I've got a first draft. I think it's really cool, kind of like the 'luck of the five kings' I did for that wiki fantasy project Pete was doing.
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Post by Jenny (Reffy) on Feb 4, 2015 3:55:43 GMT -5
Round 4 idea is possibly shifting from Bizarre Bazaar to Memory Market although a mad Irishman features in both ideas. Would like to save the Bizarre Bazaar for a story which can be colourful and flowery prose and not a flash as it would not do it justice.
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Post by Injin on Feb 5, 2015 19:40:58 GMT -5
Promise to get my post up by Friday night. I have a midterm to write, though, that comes first.
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Post by James on Feb 6, 2015 17:13:31 GMT -5
749 words.
Phew.
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Post by ASGetty ((Zovo)) on Feb 6, 2015 17:24:02 GMT -5
That was fun, a good little read. Much easier to get into than some of you're other stuff so far. |
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Losing oomph and will.
