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Post by James on Jan 13, 2013 23:24:29 GMT -5
Box One: Three men sit in the long, narrow interior of an airplane, one facing across from the other two. The insides are bathed in a cherry-red hue. All three are dressed in full Kelvar, tactical body armour. A bowler hat sits atop the third man's head. ... I have no idea. I feel like I'm creating a bastard child between a script and a piece of prose. [Panel 1] Long, narrow corridor; interior of an airplane. Three silhouettes in distance. [P2] One man sits across from two others; the three dressed in tactical Kevlar; first man has a bowler hat [P3] James, looking out window: "Bangladesh used to be beautiful." [P4] Close-up on exterior, Bangladesh. Text-bubble from outside-panel, "...you know, before the mutant tarantulas." Pete. Let's make sure to call them boxes the -entire- time. Dammit. Eugh. Fail. And dude, we have to start with Hungary. None of this Bangladesh crap. |
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Post by James on Jan 13, 2013 23:30:59 GMT -5
[Panel 1] Long, narrow corridor; interior of an airplane. Three silhouettes in distance.
[P2] One man sits across from two others; the three dressed in tactical Kevlar; first man has a bowler hat, which is askew.
[P3] Matteo, looking down at an elaborate pocket-watch: "Well, that could have gone worse."
[P3] James, straightening his bowler hat: "Oh yeah. I say we did them a favour, cleared up that Old God problem with not too much of a fuss."
[P4] Pete, looking out of a window: "Well, maybe a little bit of a fuss..."
[P5] Close-up on exterior, Hungary. Various buildings are on fire. Text-bubble from outside-panel, "... and you know, a few explosions."
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Post by Deleted on Jan 13, 2013 23:47:00 GMT -5
Not to derail your fascinating transition of prose to comic script, but I've nearly finished reviewing. Two stories left. Some have been meh, some have been great. I can't really point to one and say 'This one's [x]' except for one I -believe- may be either Agro or Taed's.
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Post by Kaez on Jan 13, 2013 23:53:39 GMT -5
Not to derail your fascinating transition of prose to comic script, but I've nearly finished reviewing. Two stories left. Some have been meh, some have been great. I can't really point to one and say 'This one's [x]' except for one I -believe- may be either Agro or Taed's. Now there are two authors I would not easily confuse. |
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Post by ASGetty ((Zovo)) on Jan 13, 2013 23:57:23 GMT -5
Not to derail your fascinating transition of prose to comic script, but I've nearly finished reviewing. Two stories left. Some have been meh, some have been great. I can't really point to one and say 'This one's [x]' except for one I -believe- may be either Agro or Taed's. Now there are two authors I would not easily confuse. Agreed. |
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Post by J.O.N ((Dragonwing)) on Jan 13, 2013 23:57:23 GMT -5
The three-way match was friendship.
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Post by James on Jan 14, 2013 0:03:21 GMT -5
Not to derail your fascinating transition of prose to comic script, but I've nearly finished reviewing. Two stories left. Some have been meh, some have been great. I can't really point to one and say 'This one's [x]' except for one I -believe- may be either Agro or Taed's. Now there are two authors I would not easily confuse. I would agree with you. Except now that I think about it, there's a story which I suppose does lend itself to being one of ours. |
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Post by James on Jan 14, 2013 0:06:13 GMT -5
The three-way match was friendship. I think Friendship is going to get a winner who really has to up their game. Because I think both stories were beaten by soon-to-be-losers in a couple of games, let alone the actual winners. However, I also think both the writers of Friendship have the groundwork to actually manage that upping of said game. |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 14, 2013 0:10:26 GMT -5
The three-way match was friendship. I think Friendship is going to get a winner who really has to up their game. Because I think both stories were beaten by soon-to-be-losers in a couple of games, let alone the actual winners. However, I also think both the writers of Friendship have the groundwork to actually manage that upping of said game. I would say something about you revealing too much, but I think I can be honest and say that you definitely didn't write either of those. |
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Post by Kaez on Jan 14, 2013 0:11:59 GMT -5
I think Friendship is going to get a winner who really has to up their game. Because I think both stories were beaten by soon-to-be-losers in a couple of games, let alone the actual winners. However, I also think both the writers of Friendship have the groundwork to actually manage that upping of said game. I would say something about you revealing too much, but I think I can be honest and say that you definitely didn't write either of those. I've spoken about every match. I've used the phrases, "the writer" and "the writers". One of them is me. But that didn't stop me from wording it that way. He's not giving away anything. |
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Post by James on Jan 14, 2013 0:12:07 GMT -5
I think Friendship is going to get a winner who really has to up their game. Because I think both stories were beaten by soon-to-be-losers in a couple of games, let alone the actual winners. However, I also think both the writers of Friendship have the groundwork to actually manage that upping of said game. I would say something about you revealing too much, but I think I can be honest and say that you definitely didn't write either of those. I could also be bluffing like hell. I'm not really believing a word anyone is saying at the moment. Zovo said he didn't write anything till the end. He may have been writing all week. Pete has picked Charlotte One as his favourite of the round. He may have wrote Charlotte One. If I was George Smiley, I would have fired the entire Circus. |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 14, 2013 0:14:47 GMT -5
I would say something about you revealing too much, but I think I can be honest and say that you definitely didn't write either of those. I could also be bluffing like hell. I'm not really believing a word anyone is saying at the moment. Zovo said he didn't write anything till the end. He may have been writing all week. Pete has picked Charlotte One as his favourite of the round. He may have wrote Charlotte One. If I was George Smiley, I would have fired the entire Circus. No, see, I'm about 99% sure that neither of those yours, because your stories are usually on a whole 'nother level of better. |
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Post by James on Jan 14, 2013 0:15:35 GMT -5
I could also be bluffing like hell. I'm not really believing a word anyone is saying at the moment. Zovo said he didn't write anything till the end. He may have been writing all week. Pete has picked Charlotte One as his favourite of the round. He may have wrote Charlotte One. If I was George Smiley, I would have fired the entire Circus. No, see, I'm about 99% sure that neither of those are as good as your stories usually are. I think I'm going out. WHAT DO YOU BELIEVE NOW? |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 14, 2013 0:17:19 GMT -5
No, see, I'm about 99% sure that neither of those are as good as your stories usually are. I think I'm going out. WHAT DO YOU BELIEVE NOW? I believe I'm going to win the entire championship through defaults. From here on out or here and onward? Who knows! |
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Post by James on Jan 14, 2013 0:20:41 GMT -5
I think I'm going out. WHAT DO YOU BELIEVE NOW? I believe I'm going to win the entire championship through defaults. From here on out or here and onward? Who knows! Double bluff. You were facing a default. Don't try and play the game with me, sir. You know who I am. They get into the car and drive away. |
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