The Sonnet of the Night

[ARSmith ((Wolfeh))]

Sonnet of the Night

I dare not deny thy night as a beast
Whose gaping maw hath devoured my sky
In the blackness it so generously distributes
As far as thine eye can see.
Although its many twinkling spots glow
Its single shining eye creeps
Unblinkingly across the abyss
In which it hath created.
If the night is no beast,
Then I am certain the sun hath no shine.

[Kaez]

(( Get rid of the apostrophes in the 'its'! That's for contraction only, not possessive. ))

[ARSmith ((Wolfeh))]

Nov 10, 2010 21:19:26 GMT -5 Kaez said:

(( Get rid of the apostrophes in the 'its'! That's for contraction only, not possessive. ))

(( Thank you... xD Fixed. ))

[Bloodeye the Bai Ze]

(( Puts poem up on the fridge.))

[ARSmith ((Wolfeh))]

(( Wait a minute. I fucked up big time. This wasn't the sonnet I intended. A sonnet is 14 lines. I thought I counted 14. >< ))